Wednesday 26 October 2016

My writing

Hi and welcome back to my blog. Here is my writing. 

I have done this independently for my writing sample.
                
         Little red riding hood

One day when little red riding hood was going to her grandma's house because her grandma was very sick. So off she went to her grandmas house on the way she ran into mr wolf.


Mr wolf said do you want to pick some flowers for your grandma he said yes that is very kind mr wolf well I think I have enough. Where does your grandma live said mr wolf down the path she said.

Mr wolf said do you want to pick some flowers for your grandma he said yes that is very kind mr wolf well I think I have enough. Where does your grandma live said mr wolf down the path she said.

Ok by said mr wolf when little red riding hood got to her grandma house. The wolf was already there so when she got in side so she said hi grandma.
Are you feeling well she said but then wow grandma what big ears you have better to hear you with my dear said the wolf. What a big nose you have better to smell food better my dear what big teeth you have better to eat you ahhhhhhhh.


Said little red riding hood but then the grandma came out of the cupboard and whacked the wolf on the
head and the wolf ran away and little red riding hood and her grandma lived happily ever after the end.




4 comments:

  1. That is a really great piece of writing Reese! I love all the information and detail in this writing. Keep up the awesome work!

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  2. Amazing piece of writing Reese. I love the detail you put in our writing.
    Well done!

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